Double Date

Location 1. Exterior. Forest.
Close up feet hitting the ground.
Slightly wider shot Guy 1 unbuckles parachute harness.
Reveal 2 more characters. Both are female. both in various stages of parachute unhooking. all three in uniform black.
2 shot Girl 1 in foreground. Guy 1 in back ground. Focus on Girl 1.
Girl 1: You alright, babe?
Guy 1: Yeah.
Girl 1: (as camera pans to other side) "Girl 2?" (insert girl 2 name here)
Girl 2: Golden.
Girl 1: Let's move.

All three move forward.
Girl 1 Picks up something. (maybe ripped fabric or dropped something?)
Girl 1: "Girl 2"?
Girl 2: (takes "something" from girl one) Yeah. (looks away. looking for clues/ signs)

(further along)
three spot 'hideout' (fortress, shack, old building, whatever) (regardless of the outside inside must have large interior.)

hide out entrance has out-of-place door lock. Fortunately Guy 1 is prepared. He pulls lock open to hack in.

Interior. inside 'hideout'. three in a line. Girl 1, Guy 1, Girl 2.

Girl 1 flattens self against wall. Dude 1 (a thug) comes around corner. Girl 1 punches him across face. Dude 1 hits the floor. All three step over him and proceed around the corner.

Guy 1 has electronic finding thingy. He examines it and points down a hall way.

They enter a door. three 'Dude's are in the room. A fight ensues. Quick, extreme close-ups illustrate fight.
Foot kicks gun out of hand. Fist in face. Elbow in ribs. Etc. Over quickly.

All 'dude's are down. In the center of body pile is a chair. Tied to chair is Guy 2.
Girl 2 approaches Guy 2. Touches face.
Girl 2: (smiles for the first time) Hey.
Guy 2: (also smiling but tired) Hey.

Guy 3 enters. He is dressed like other 4. All 4 are alert. Girl 2 is helping Guy 2 out of chair. ***
He enters with a small army.

Guy 3: Welcome. I wasn't sure you would come.

Girl 1: Our first rule is loyalty remember.

Guy 3: The second rule- Violence only when neccesary.


*** Guy 3: Welcome. I wasn't sure you would come.

Girl 1: Our first rule is loyalty, remember.

Guy 3: (Pulls gun.) Third Rule- No guns.

(other four pull together. general sense of sacrilege in response to Guy 3 holding a gun.)

Guy 3: Second Rule- Violence only when necessary. I was never good at all this.

Girl 2: Yes you were.

Girl 1: Come back with us. You can have a second chance.

Guy 3: I'm having way too much fun.

Girl 1: (shrugs) Alright

Guy 2 ducks. Girl 1 kicks the gun from hands. Girl 2 delivers uppercut to chin. Guy 3 goes down.

Girl 1: (to Girl 2) Tie him up.

Girl 2 moves to tie up Guy 3 when-

Guy 1: Stop. (he holds a gun. aimed at Guy 2)

Girl 2 stops. looks at Guy 1 and at Guy 2.

Guy 2: Why?

Guy 1: This is more fun. ( He shoots Guy 2 in the leg) Much more fun.

Guy 1: stops and falls forward. Girl 1 has thrown a knife into his back.

Girl 1: Loyalty.

V.O. Guy 1: "Girl 1" you killed me.

All characters stop moving. in neutral pose.

Girl 1: (as camera pans back) You deserved it, punk.

Reveal- 4/5 friends sitting around living room playing video game. they are now dressed in jeans and tee- shirts.

Girl 2: You totally deserved it, "Guy 2"

Guy 2: Can we get back to killing "Guy 4", now?

Girl 2: I got your back, baby.

Jan and Jonos: A Spirits of the Force Fan-Fic

Jan was a rebel agent. Tough. Determined. She fired heavy artillary, knocked the sense out of grown men, and flew space ships into battle.

It was different with Jonos. With him she was soft lines and curves. She was just a girl. In love.

That all changed when she got the transmission. Mon Mothma told her about the massacre. Some detail struck her. It jogged a memory of something she had overheard. And she knew.

Just like that, she shifted. Despite her soft hair flowing around her face and silky robes draped over her form, she was hard lines and angles. She was a rebel agent. A soldier. And it was a soldier that burst into Jonos's office that evening.

"Tell me you didn't do it!" Jan demanded through a clenched jaw. There was no question in his eyes. And no denial.

He tried to justify. He explained how this one contact, this one job and he would be finished. He would have all the money they needed. She could leave the rebellion. He could quit smuggling. They could go off together. Buy a small moon. Live out their lives in peace and luxury.

She used to smile when Jonos talked about buying a moon. She used to laugh and show him which one she wanted. Not tonight. Everything that made her happy with him- the laughter, the love- had vanished.

She left. And with her Jonos saw all his visions for the future disapear with the breaking dawn. He saw his home with a family. A pet. Someplace peaceful and green. A life away from the war. That morning she flew away with it all.