Write within the lines

This is another one with 2 versions. The subject is the same. The 1st version is about rhythm. The second one...well...



Write within the Lines (Original)

The words were put in quarantine
to curb the wild ink.

With strictest eye examining
the poem took its shape.

When all were ordered perfectly
the stopper was released.

And like water all the words
marched smoothly down the sink.


Write Within the Lines (portfolio Version)

The words were pushed through presses
Then made stand in lines.

In stanzas neatly organized
With carefully crafted rhymes.

The words were given marching
Orders and structured stringently.

Pressed and tidy, spit and shined
They stood for reveille.

Soon all were ordered perfectly
And ready to advance.

Pen was put to paper and

Hmm… A.W.O.L.